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Opera render number two by ErikServin Opera render number two by ErikServin
My second render, same model character, but with improved geometry, textures and materials, any critic is welcome! :nod:

Mi segundo render, mismo modelo de personaje, pero con geometría, texturas y materiales mejorados, cualquier crítica es bienvenida! :nod:
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CrazyDragy Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Looks nice but it strongly resembles a stick figure becouse of its shapes. Its not neceseraly bad ,but usualy can look somewhat plain and anatomicly weird
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, but this was the first character i ever modeled, so i still have to learn more about it.
And yeah, i think i did him too skinny, i'll remake him a little more filled 😛
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CrazyDragy Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
We improve ! ^^
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah we do! ÒwÓ
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CrazyDragy Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Well be the best! Around!!!!!
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Nothing's gonna ever keep us down!!!!!!
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CrazyDragy Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Oh yeah baby!
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I am not a baby >:V
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XUranusX Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2016
oh wow. so awesome :)
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much, what do you think i could do to improve him?
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XUranusX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016
hmm.. well i dont know much but umm, try scraft ? and hey its your Chara/Art, you choose if you wanna add anything new or just keep it as he is. :D
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I was asking about technical things, liking proportion and things like that, but i appreciate your advice :nod:
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LaTiaMega Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Esta bien, excelente, parece diseño de un videojuego, no conozco mucho sobre los programas 3D, pero de criticas, te puedo recomendar no hacer las piernas tan largas ( de la parte del femur xD ) solo eso :3
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Anderstud!
Ahora que lo dices, si hay un problema de proporción, debo mejorarlo, pero en realidad yo mismo noto varios errores al ver el producto final, pero si tomas en cuenta que cada render toma 3 horas en procesarse, pues no es que pueda estar haciendo uno nuevo por cada error que veo XD
Pero de los errores se aprende, ademas, arriesgandome a sonar engreido o algo, se ve mucho mejor que muchos otros trabajos de principiante ^^;
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LaTiaMega Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
aaaah, por eso decia que no conozco los programas que usas a la hora de hacer 3D, con el tiempo más encima que te toma corregir cada error xD
Eso si, me gusta las texturas que le diste :3
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Si, si tan solo tuviera una computadora mas potente podria hacer tantos renders quisiera, pero como no, pues no :c

Gracias, y se pondrá mejor, lo juro ;)
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LaTiaMega Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Bueno :c
Denada :3
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ErikServin Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Oks c:
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